Should the following be one paragraph, or school I keep it the same?
Brooke asked: I am wiriting historical fiction for a project at school. Should I kep this format or put it all in one paragraph? I need rules too, not jst what looks better. All the sudden, Mr. Brown’s eyes fogged over. They were really wide and he didn’t blink. His voice was very unusual as [...]
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I am wiriting historical fiction for a project at school. Should I kep this format or put it all in one paragraph? I need rules too, not jst what looks better.
All the sudden, Mr. Brown’s eyes fogged over. They were really wide and he didn’t blink.
His voice was very unusual as he said, “In 1917 the first annual of the “Reflector”, the school’s yearbook, will be published. The high school enrollment will be seventy-nine.
“In 1918, a third of the school will be absent do to influenza. The will close down the school for more than a week.
“In 1925 an east wing will be added to Union School, housing more classrooms and a cafeteria.
“In the 1930s there will be a Great Depression and the salaries of the teachers will be cut in 1933. Meal tickets will be given to needy children.”
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#1. September 16th, 2009, at 12:35 PM.
The speech should be kept as one paragraph I think, as it’s not like there’s an extensive amount of information about each topic. There should be a new paragraph between “he didnt blink. / his voice was very…” though, so no need to change anything there.